16 Aralık 2012 Pazar

My argumentative essay

 People misinterpreting religion think that women are created for bringing up children and dealing with the problems faced at home. She doesn’t have to work outside the home. But I think this is just an illogical comment done inconsiderately.
There are many supporting reasons. First of all, working outside the home, seeing different faces, interacting with people and so many things are enough to make people happier and healthier. As a result, the more interactive relationship we take part in, the healthier we are tend to be. For an example, according to a survey, Employed women of all ages and occupations have a lower mortality rate and better reported and perceived health than women who do not work outside the home. If there’s a change to make people healthier, how can we make a selfish decision by not letting women have it too? Second of all, Working provides people mental growth. It helps people think creatively and makes easier to come up with a solution in everyday life. All people have the right to be independent. Thinking logically makes women stronger. When they face a problem, they are able to deal with it. What about the others?  Will women who are dependent on their family or husband be able to rebuild their life? Can we tell that Religion would like to see women in misery? Of course, answers would be NO. Last of all, as I mentioned before, it doesn’t need to have reasons. As No one has the right to take another’s life, we can’t have the right to comment on whether women should work outside the home or not.

                   All people are created equal in rights, dignity, and the potential to achieve great things. True opportunity requires that we all have equal access to the benefits, burdens and responsibilities of our society regardless of gender.

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